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Stunning examples of English prose...

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What are some of the most beautiful examples of English writing? Your favorite quotes or excerpt from your favorite writers/ novels where you felt the author displayed complete command of the language. Here's an example.

"When he reached her she lay in her blood in the grass and he knelt with the rifle and put his hand on her neck and she looked at him and her eyes were warm and wet and there was no fear in them and then she died. He sat watching her for a long time. He thought about the captain and he wondered if he were alive and he thought about Blevins. He thought about Alejandra and he remembered her the first time he ever saw her passing along the cienaga road in the evening with the horse still wet from her riding it in the lake and he remembered the birds and the cattle standing in the grass and the horses on the mesa. The sky was dark and a cold wind ran through the bajada and in the dying light a cold blue cast had turned the doe’s eyes to but one thing more of things she lay among in that darkening landscape. Grass and blood. Blood and stone. Stone and the dark medallions that the first flat drops of rain caused upon them.
He remembered Alejandra and the sadness he’d first seen in the slope of her shoulders which he’d presumed to understand and of which he knew nothing and he felt a loneliness he’d not known since he was a child and he felt wholly alien to the world although he loved it still. He thought that in the beauty of the world were hid a secret. He thought that the world’s heart beat at some terrible cost and that the world’s pain and its beauty moved in a relationship of diverging equity and that in this headlong deficit the blood of multitudes might ultimately be exacted for the vision of a single flower.
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- All The Pretty Horses
 
I found Colleen McCullough's writing in The Thorn Birds to be astonishingly beautiful. The harshness of rugged Australian landscape, the ebb and flows of forbidden love, the heartbreaks, and the evolution of characters leaves with memories that are impossible to forget.
I also found Kristin Hannah's novel The Great Alone equally riveting.
Ken Follett is another author who creates characters that makes it impossible for you to stay indifferent to them.
 
Any of Churchill’s writings really; the man had complete command of the English language by 23.

It’s evident by his “The Scaffolding of Rhetoric” that he understood the craftsmanship of the written and spoken word.
 
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