Ranjha
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does any one of you write poetry ? if so would love to read if you guys can post here.
plz dont post from other poets etc
thanx
plz dont post from other poets etc
thanx
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one day please also allow me a hug
note, plz dont read hug like in our desi languages.
thoree gandi poetry challugee..?
I have written, some published and some unpublished.
published ? where can i buy a book containing your poetry ?
If they've got any stock in, Amazon (UK) and Blackwells.
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thoree gandi poetry challugee..?
I just created a cricketing poem on the spot:
Afridi enters the wicket with the score at 59 for 2,
I close my eyes and play peek-a-boo.
Open them again with the score at 59 for 3,
I wonder what happened?
Oh, the batsman was Afridi.
I Yawned and sighed at the same time reading this. I yawsighed.
Sorry but I never said I'm a potential William Wordsworth.
Your quality will be still better than mine, as I will have to google who is William Wordsworth. I just wanted to impress people with the word Yawsighed.
I sincerely doubt that. Besides, are you being serious that you don't know who Wordsworth is? He's one of the poetic giants. Just for the record the word 'yawsighed' is impressive as it signifies Afridi's whole career.
Phir ban bhee challugee...thoree gandi poetry challugee..?
Supporter of Pak legends owning this thread!
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And failing miserably as well...![]()
But keep trying! This thread is there for a reason
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Other people should participate as well. Maybe they consider poetry as a feminine art?
I will try something soon. But, it is not a feminine art at all.
For all crap poets:
I walked past a door,
Which had a boar lying on the floor.
Its tusks are sharp,
Like the fins of a carp,
Which can pierce my skin to the core.
heres more professional work on my part
Look at my luck,
fond of stealing, i kidnapped a duck
its owner rang the door bell
i was suddenly like "what da hell !"
with him he brought the police
in fear, i couldnt even sneeze
but seeing the pistols i had to freeze
how was it ? it rhymes & covers a true story as well.
Another one from me. I feel like I'm on a roll with my crap ones.
Anway I hope this is better:
There is a big black cube in the centre of the Earth,
The rise of Prophet Adam (AS) saw its birth.
Took over by the Christians and Pagan,
For them it is inevitable that they will be met by Armageddon.
They forgot the rule of one God and instead thought that there more than double,
One of the deities' name was the non-existent Hubal.
Reconstructed by Ibrahim (AS)
Who rebuilt it with his brother Ishmael (AS) as a team.
From all over the world people pray this way,
In June, July and even may.
The direction a Muslim prays is to the house of Allah,
From Australia, Africa and even Guatemala!
Inside the Ka'aba lays the holy black stone,
Which fell to the Earth like a drone.
Although it wasn't deadly
Muslims' hands have touched it creating a DNA medley.
I could've carried on further but I decided to stop.
It's good but "police" and "sneeze" don't exactly rhyme. Anyway, there is no need to worry as none of us are professional poets, apart from James, who for some reason hasn't written any poems yet.
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PLS DONT USE WORDS LIKE C RAP WHEN YOU USE SUCH HOLY NAMES IN A WRITING.
thanx
they take this to twist this to take this to tame this
they take this to throw this to taper this to top this
rented ruthless runts runnning round releasing remnants releasing related rage
returning raped relatives reminiscing of a running race revisiting ravishment
underaged and used. utilised then unseen, found underneath the urban ustreams
trapped and taken, this aint a first for the thirst , code told to all the teams
hello, get a hollow hi ,hips still lie, hitted, helpless hi's, housed for higher highs
trapped in the ruined and used taken heritages now represennting decay
fly away, he jumped out the window, he'l never get a say
truth is somewhere but the paper says he fell by accident
he was living in a happy home it says, till he met with the pavement
he fought for the truth but only the few know that, just another name
the truth is always the same, hidden and blamed
Seriously love "Nadaan Parindey" song. May one day just end up writing a poem being inspired by this line.
A heart is like a bird and its wishes and desires are like wings. It is confronted by darkness, the dark clouds, but yet it flies further using its wings, dreaming that it can reach it. It sees its wings as such a powerful force which makes it assume that it will reach it trying different ways, even though it never can.
A "nadaan parinda" indeed, isn´t it?
Naïve Bird
"This disobedient heart of mine,
Is like a bird which has become thine,
Wherever you go, it follows you,
Prays for success, whatever you do.
Badly hurt, bruised and battered,
I still admire it for the courage it gathered,
Ignoring the hunters, it chases its dream,
Flying above the sea and the streams.
O` Naïve being, come you back,
World asks for everything that you lack,
O` Bird, tempt you not fate,
For the outcome won´t be any great.
Fly not too high, requests you Rawal,
For this downfall won't have a revival,
Ultimately, it only has pain and grief,
The joy is shortlived and very brief.
Blameless is the one it flies after, though,
Fault is all mine, the one who let it go,
O` friends, if you find it, clip its wings,
Before further curiosity and wait it brings."
Poem (written by Rawal Afzal) completed at 21:10 PM CEST (1st April, 2013).
Beautiful, gentle poem. How was mine on Germany?![]()
Thanks man.
Yeah, just went through your poem about Germany. Nice. Mind you, never studied history much, so maybe it adds to my knowledge as well.
^ http://www.pakpassion.net/ppforum/showpost.php?p=5577517&postcount=1263 ^
My signature nowadays is the following since many days now.....
"O´ nadaan parindey ghar aa jaa.... "
And the avatar picture too, also attached below, is dedicated to it.
^ http://www.pakpassion.net/ppforum/showpost.php?p=5656204&postcount=1308 ^
And my friends, in next post follows my poetry......
Did you just quote yourself twice in one post?
Have written plenty of lyrics and spoken word with poetry in there. But never had the time to study how to structure a poem. I just let it flow.
I never thought I'd say this but I am leading the poetry thread in terms of the amount of poems posted. Have you read the rest of my poems as well?
awesome stuff by Dhoni183,Supporter of Pak Legends and others![]()
Amazing stuff guys, Mash'Sha'Allah
Keep'em coming fellas
Rawal bhai,
the naive bird has to remain naive, if it was practical it's life will lose its meaning. the dangers of the world is preferable to it compared to the safety of the cage and having its wings clipped.. like the fireflies life gets its meaning when it kisses the flame and dies..so does the life of the naive bird which goes and explores the dangers of the world, in the hope of finding land and a place to make a nest. so keep going nadaan parinday..whether you(the bird) find your destination or not, and fulfil the meaning of your life.
Yeah, I read all of your poems apart from the one about Germany since it required time and I had thought of reading it today, but I did it yesterday itself after you drew my attention to it.
Keep going!
Other people should participate as well. Maybe they consider poetry as a feminine art?
Thanks, Rawal bhai!![]()
Good stuff Rawal bro and SOPL(yaar can't you change your username its quite long?)
Nasir Jamshed, a classy left-hander,
Just like that of Saeed Anwar,
Like Gower, Lara and Pollock before him,
His elegance if full to the brim.
Problem: he is not one who hits the gym,
Much like Inzi he is not one to be called slim.
Already, he seems to be an Indian foe,
Like Saeed Anwar was when the two teams went toe-to-toe.
Scoring three centuring on the trot against them,
This has seen many refer to him as a complete gem.
With the talent, he is expected to go extremely far,
but Umar Akmal has shown talent doesn't mean anything if you have the mind of a Nissan Micra.
A couple of great poems by Rawal there.
"It was a secret not known to many on PakPassion,
Except a thread where I made confession,
A devilish temptation of a thread!
To many memories which led."
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